Donna I like the painting’s use of colour. I think you are bolder with colour than you think. I like you are thinking of and trying to use several elements. I like the subtle quiet areas and I think they are far more than the grey. Lines, curves, you have struck a wonderful balance in your piece while having lots of interest.You have a beautiful glow with the red and a sense of inner light guiding us almost like into a universe in the middle. I could look at this for quite a while!