moscatel said "Ntl, excellent work and very good view with clear shapes and interesting colors to paint. You asked for C&C so I might pick one thing that might be ok in your painting but show different in photo: anyway .. the distant line where the blue lake area meets the distant green foliage is the same value (and color) as the tree branches. At first it looks to me that this distant line is one of the tree branches. By painting it different from the branches you can add something lighter to the mixture like I would mix OH Ultramarine Blue deep and white. What ever you mix there to make it lighter (bluer, greyer) check the mixture if it corresponds to the tone and value of that line, meaning the value of course but also if the line is warm or cool tone. Yellows and reds drop out first (I think in that order) when it comes to distance but there is one guy who could make those work in the distance, his name is Levitan."
First, thanks so much for these comments. They are appreciated, and I will keep them in mind.
That lake area--thanks for recognizing it as water,
I wasn't sure at all it came across that way. It's actually not a lake but rather a drainage pond for the neighborhood I live in. It stretches maybe 150 yards, and is maybe 10-15 yards wide behind our house.
You're correct about that shore line, and I should not have left it like that.
I will make an explanation here--not as excuse, but to further understand:
my own understanding: I got somewhat energized reading this thread at my computer, looking at the burning bush, knowing I had wanted to paint it a few weeks ago while it still had some green.
I had this paper gessoed and handy, along with two brushes, and my tiny plein air study kit that I thought had enough paint in it waited in the freezer. I retrieved it, a bottle of oil and my palette, got settIed at my desk, and opened the paint case to find myself short on most colors, including yellow, green, and blue.
I did have white, 3 reds, orange, cad yellow deep, a touch of a lemon color, and a bit of cerulean and even less ultramarine.) I chose to use what I had --thinking of DM here, and running out of paint--make do--rather than go replenish what was missing. Normally, when I finish with this little paint kit I do clean out the bays and add paint as needed. I guess I didn't do that last time.
I was afraid I'd get distracted and not do this...This is not where I generally paint with oils.
I obstructed myself by not being prepared--not taking the time to better prepare, and by rushing through this, keeping in mind a "plein air time limit" of about 2 hours, and getting frustrated because of lack of blues, yellow and green.
This is the result. I really appreciate you taking the time for such a good crit and suggestions for improving.
One for me is, take the time to be sure I have all my paints ready.
Geoff, I don't know what red that is, it could have been a naptha red. I have several different reds and have been using them instead of cad red light in this little study kit. I did add cad orange to V left, and alizeron crimson to V right, near the green bush, trying for lights and shadows.
My kit has been re-filled and is now in the freezer waiting for the next time.
moscatel, again, thanks.