Thank you Joy. Very kind of you to say so. I think I need to figure out how to better do bushes and foliage though. Among other thingsRikard, I really admire the way you have accomplished the simplification of shapes and composition in multiple works here. It is hard for me to be anything but literal.
Joy, I think you are spot on. More tonal variation is needed. Even though I paint loose and naive/abstract, I still want things to be recognisable to at least some extent. I might give it another go in a few daysRikard, I know very little about abstract art. I think your shapes are good, but my personal preference is more tonal contrast. Maybe more values in the foliage would be desirable.