hmmmm.... I disagree *your* changing colour vision somehow makes this *bad art*; it's a solid work, with strong horizontals in the quirky clouds, an Over the Hills and Far Away middle and the two figures walking along the road to new adventure. There's good colour harmonies, and terrific repetition of shapes.
So, your work- you get to do as you please with it. Just know that I, who dislikes high chromas, can like this very much because of the control you used making it. It may be "rich", but so is Creme Brulee- although it is best for breakfast....