Fits Of Rage

[Mississippi Hippie]

Two paintings .. title because someone was at my house, got mad, and took my painting off the canvas and broke a hole in it!
Don’t know dimensions off hand but used acrylic, spray paint, and oil pastels.
Feedback would be helpful.

 

[Artyczar]

I really like them both! Maybe the top more than the next, but they both have good compositions to my eye.

 

[ZenDruid]

I like your designs. On the first one, that large green shape in the middle seems to detract from the rest. How would I fix it? Leave it, but put another rectangle over it, not to hide it, just to reassociate it with the others. Nice painting. The second is very colorful

 

[Mississippi Hippie]

Thanks Artyczar!!

Thanks ZD!! I might do that ... sounds like a good way to pull it all together.

 

[Donna T]

I'm so sorry someone put a hole in a painting! I like your bold and colorful style. Making compositions that work is a challenge but for me it's part of the fun.

 

[Mississippi Hippie]

Donna I agree. I don’t know how to market it as well. Composition is the fundamental of Art, to my understanding. It is the focus and continuation of every mark.