Thank you all for the interest and comments, much appreciated.. Sorry that this reply is tardy, but I was out of action again for a bit.
Sno , Arty and Desforges -
I followed your helpful suggestions to an extent that hopefully was not overdoing it.
I was hesitant to go further because it looked like I might be losing that sort of soft golden glow of a hazy day and making it too sharp and bright, if you see what I mean. I could go further, but I find it is so hard to ‘back up’ or erase in pastel that I didn’t want to go too far, and I did not try to correct the shaky strokes on the tree trunk for fear of making it worse.
Those factors are why I rarely use pastel; that, and the dust.
Should I go even further with something?
stlukesguild -
Yeah, I have an idea of what that allergy does; my brother and now my grandson have it much to your degree, but at least now there are such things as anti-histamines for my grandson. A miserable state to be in.
I give heavy weight to your comments, and am greatly pleased that you approve of the piece.
Since you have probably done more square footage of pastels than anybody, I wonder how you would do major surgery to this one, such as removing or covering a big tree and putting a shed or house in its place?
This pastel is on the smooth side of a Mi-Teintes paper toned a light beige.
ntl and joe1lt -
Glad that you like it. I don’t know if I ‘improved’ the sky in the revised version or not.