NezumiMaus5
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I already know the story and script isn't the absolute best lul cause I'm not a writer but I wouldn't mind any tips on where I failed and where I succeed. I know it's not going to be the best at the start but it will improve over time that's A 100% chapter 1 art isn't that great but chapter 2 gets a better upgrade artistic upgrade tho I do wish I have done the script alittle better with more inner dialogue explaining exactly what happening or how hanako feels. TwT honestly a little mb.
I'm not gonna act like it's the best of the best or anything. But I would looovee to know what parts of the comic in good at and what parts I need work on (besides the art lul I working hard on that)
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I'm not gonna act like it's the best of the best or anything. But I would looovee to know what parts of the comic in good at and what parts I need work on (besides the art lul I working hard on that)
Isekai Amulet Hanako-Sama | English | GlobalComix
Read Isekai Amulet Hanako-Sama Online. reincarted in a another hanako treats her new life as a restart to become the best person she can...
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