Object-Study(1)

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The beginning of still life.

Subject : Object-Study(1)
Saturday, 17 January 2026
Lumi-Journey, Gi So Jeong

Any feedback on the sketch would be appreciated!
 
So far it looks great to me. Maybe one of the tortillons is understandably a bit twisted but mostly it does look great.
 
It looks good .. the bottle is wonky .. if you run a vertical line down the middle from the cap you will see both sides are off more than they should be.
 
I also noticed that, but the original picture has the same asymmetric shape, so I guess the bottle just is like that, which means the sketch is more faithful to reality than what the mind expects. Good observational skills, both of you.
 
also noticed that, but the original picture has the same asymmetric shape, so I guess the bottle just is like that
… don’t forget you are looking at a picture of a bottle .. cameras lie .. oops, grapes got it before . Sorry, did not see the reply.
 
"Big thanks to txomsy, Enyaw, and Grapes!

I actually hadn't noticed that the spray bottle looked crooked until you pointed it out.

The reason I posted both the reference photo and my drawing was that I was confused. Even though I viewed the object from the same angle as the photo, my drawing seemed distorted compared to the camera image. Thanks to the feedback here, I've realized that there is a fundamental difference between a photograph and the physical reality.

To my naked eye, the actual spray bottle didn't look crooked, yet the photo clearly captures the angle I was looking at. While I've gained some understanding, I am now debating whether I should strictly reference the original photo or draw the object exactly as I see it in real life, without relying on the photo.

Someone advised me to analyze this 'distortion process'—specifically, to try translating my sensory perception into structure by comparing how I draw based on a photo versus how I draw based on my eye. I was really curious about where exactly the divergence occurs between the brain's visual processing and the camera's mechanical recognition.

For my next sketch, I plan to experiment with both approaches and upload the results.Your feedback really made me reflect deeply on my process. I realized I wasn't initially clear about what exactly I was asking, but I am so grateful to txomsy, Enyaw, and Grapes for your insightful advice!"
 
You are welcome. You might give some thought as to what you want the viewer to see. Some great artists actually distorted perspective intentionally. If it looks right to you it is right as there is no right or wrong.
 
Thanks to you for the confidence and bravery in facing open criticism. That's so uncommon it is laudable.

As for the bottle, I am not sure, it looks to me, from the picture, that the bottles is actually asymmetric in reality, and it matches my experience of this kind of spray bottles. That rises the point you brought up so nicely: should one paint things as they actually are or as one "sees" them?

Generally speaking, I think that painting things as they are (like a photo) is better for the viewer will notice, consciously or not, any deviation. But then, that's what photographs excel at. Where photos fail is at distorting reality to match our "feelings" or expectations, which is a freedom painting gives but Photography makes more difficult to achieve. Just by painting what you "see", you are already including that subjective factor. My personal point of view is that this subjectivity is best achieved when it is done consciously... but then one has to be careful not to overdo it or fall short.
 
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