Fall daily #2

[MurrayG]

Hi folks, a different scene from my photos. #38 in the dailys. Trying to apply lessons from experiments...
I think that I have finally some control over using gouache. If the weather is kind, I may try for some outdoors. Has some similarities to oils for me anyway. On NOT WC paper 300gm, 10X15 cm, student gouaches.
I'm a little unsure about the clouds, maybe they are an optional extra.... But here in Stockholm a blue sky day is like 7 days in a year, so clouds it is. Compositionally, hmm?

 

[MurrayG]

I really softened the clouds in the centre area, now just a softened hint upper right area. Seems better.

 

[Terri]

I think it's a nice composition, and I am enjoying that dazzling blue sky. Your colorful center trees are lovely! This is nicely balanced. Good job.